Tryna bring it back a few years

We are tryin to bring it back a few years:
critique. hard.
http://myspace.com/biteyourtonguehc
thanks.

if you like it you can media fire it http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=976d58b1d7363ff97f7ec40ada4772a6e04e75f6e8ebb871
its free.

it was ok until the vocals came in. sounded kinda like Terror, so im not sure what or how far exactly youre trying to bring "it" back, whatever "it" may be. but the vocals were an annoying tone and too off time. id say get a new singer and add some more breakdowns.

where im from, kids are too into breakdowns and how deep they can get their voice, and its annoying. so we tried to bring "it" back to raw mean hardcore.not to get defensive lol,
thanks for the input though i/we really do appreciate it

"critique hard"

the vocals suck

Pretty decent stuff, fairly generic-sounding but whatever, I can see myself enjoying this live. I wouldn't consider it 'raw' or 'mean' hardcore, but that's just me. The vocals aren't problematic to me at all. The biggest problem, if you can call it that, is that you guys don't stand out really.

i feeels ya
we are all 19-20 year old kids just havin fun *Edit:(all friends from school most of which have little to no musical background)*
but ya i did want you guys to critique hard, i appreciate you guys listening.. if you only listened to the first song or one song or whatever, i feel that most people would enjoy the song "swimming with brick shoes" (my favorite) but ya i wanted to see what people thought of it outside of our area, thanks fellas

EDIT:
and if anyones got anything else id like to hear it, its not that i care that much.. more that im curious we like our music and we will keep makin' it haha